
I generally really like short stories, and while my preference is usually for collections from backlisted women writers, I am perfectly happy to sometimes read more modern collections. Your Duck is My Duck is a collection of six stories by American writer Deborah Eisenberg, who has written several other collections. I first read about the collection on Susan’s blog A Life in Books, and bought it immediately, it sounded right up my street. Overall, I did like this collection, though a couple of the stories fell a little short of my initial expectations. It is well written, and though a couple of stories left me a little cold, the others I liked. These stories are all a bit longer than some short stories, and Eisenberg uses their length the fully flesh out her characters.
The stories are by turns, dark, funny and mysterious. Eisenberg explores the strangeness in the lives and emotions of her characters with astuteness, characters are well defined. In these pieces she explores aspects of money, sex and power.
The opening story in the collection is Your Duck is My Duck from which the collection takes its title. This was I thought a very good opening to the collection. An artist is taken up by a wealthy couple who she meets at a party. It becomes clear that she has been struggling with her work, and the couple invite her to their retreat. Their retreat is on the edge of a coastal village which the couple have spoiled with their schemes. On arrival, she finds her hosts engaged in an awkward domestic conflict. There is a wonderful sense of place in this story – as there is in other pieces, I particularly enjoyed Eisenberg’s descriptions.
“I was looking out at cliffs and the sea, all sluiced in delicate pinks and yellows and greens and blues, as if the sun were imparting to the sleeping rock and water dreams of their youth, dreams of the rock’s birth in the earth’s molten core, the water’s ecstatic purity before it was sullied by life—as if the play of soft colors were the sun’s lullaby to the cliffs and the sea, of endurance and transformation.”
(Your Duck is My Duck)
Taj Mahal was definitely my favourite story in the collection, and the one I remember best. The story very cleverly moves across time periods and there are shifting perspectives, as a group of ageing movie stars react to the newly published biography of a film director, written by his grandson, based on his childhood memories of visits made to his famous grandfather. A story about the reliability of memory – as the former stars rage and dispute the facts laid out in the biography. Can their memories of the past really be trusted?
“What to do about all this horseshit? Nothing, really, nothing. But still, the ones who are left, those who happen to be in New York – Duncan, Coral, Roman and Luther – have collected, on this glassily brilliant autumn day, in the noisy bar of a restaurant that Roman likes. Emma has been included, too, although if it weren’t for this so-called memoir, these old friends of her mother’s would no doubt have forgotten all about her. Even in the book her existence is confined to pages 48, 49 and 316.”
(Taj Mahal)
In Cross off and Moves on the death notice of a cousin in the newspaper, leads a woman to remember how her difficult mother loathed her father’s sisters. She realises how many things were hidden from her, her memory of her aunts is positive, she recalls their kindness. She spends time trying to piece together the past.
Merge Is the longest story in the collection, and it started out really well, but the ending fell flat for me – and left me a bit confused. It tells the story of Keith, the son of a wealthy man, he has fallen out of favour at home, and is need of employment. He meets Celeste, a young woman a little older than himself, and she finds him work, helping an elderly neighbour of hers and giving him a place to stay while she is away. Keith helps out Mrs Cordis, one particular duty being to walk her dog Moppet. Meanwhile, somewhere a long way from home, Celeste appears to be in trouble of some kind.
The Third Tower was the story that worked least well for me, I found it all rather confusing. The confusion might well be deliberate as it portrays a young woman undergoing some neurological tests. She finds herself refusing to trust the things that are really in her mind but instead allows herself to be influenced by her doctor.
Recalculating is another excellent story; in which Adam a young man from a traditional American community, travels to England to attend the funeral of an uncle he never knew. Adam had often wondered about this uncle, had grown up asking questions which were never satisfactorily answered. Here he meets his Uncle Phillip’s circle of fairly bohemian friends; they all instantly accept Adam and he is drawn into their world.
On the basis of this collection I would definitely be interested in reading more by Deborah Eisenberg, I really liked her writing and her ability at exploring character and place.
I’m so glad to hear that you enjoyed this collection even if a couple fell short for you. Those infuriated film stars in Taj Mahal were a delight!
Taj Mahal was such a good story, I would happily have read a whole novel or novella at least about those characters. Overall I enjoyed Eisenberg’s writing. Thanks for the introduction to her.
This sounds an interesting collection and it’s good to branch out here and there and push the boundaries a bit, isn’t it (something you’re better at than me!).
It was stretching my boundaries a bit I suppose, and I am glad I did.
I only know Eisenberg through her introduction to the NYRB edition of Cassandra at the Wedding, a book I absolutely adore. Good to hear your thoughts on her short stories. They sound interesting, if a little mixed.
Ah yes, I have the same edition of Cassandra at the Wedding, I should have recognised the name. Four out of six stories worked really well for me, the other two were probably down to personal taste. Eisenberg is clearly an excellent writer.
I have a tiny book with some four or five of her short stories somewhere but I don’t think I’ve read it. Too bad not all of it was as good as Taj Mahal. I need to find that collection and see if it is among the stories.
I hope Taj Mahal is included in your book, I enjoyed that one so much. Four out of six of the stories were very good, the other two might just be my personal taste.
I checked. Unfortunately it isn’t among them. But they are also quite long for short stories.
I often find long short stories to be quite satisfying.
They are like condensed novels.
I too enjoy short collections.
I’ glad, a well written short story can be perfection.
Sounds interesting, if uneven. I’ve not read her but I’ll keep her on the radar!
Well yes, though I found four out of six stories to be really good. Sometimes it comes down to personal taste. Eisenberg is obviously a really good writer.
I’ve been intrigued by this collection ever snce it came out. Great review, Ali! It made me want to read it. 🙂
I’m so glad I’ve intrigued you. I hope you enjoy this if you ever get to it.
Very compelling review Ali! Deborah Eisenberg is new to me and even if two stories weren’t up to the mark, it sounds like a collection worth exploring.
Oh yes, I definitely think she is a writer well worth trying, I may well read another collection when my tbr is down a bit.
Short story writing is such an art, isn’t it? I know some writers think its the hardest of all the forms. This does sound a really interesting collection by a writer I’ve not read, even if it is a bit patchy.
I think you’re right, short story writing really is an art. Eisenberg is clearly a very good writer.
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This is already on my list as well (although there are a lot of story collections on that list) and I’m glad to hear that you enjoyed it. When I do get it, I’ll have a close look at Taj Mahal – it sounds exceptionally satisfying to me too.
It’s a good collection on the whole, but I do think Taj Mahal is particularly good.